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diff --git a/doc/intro.sgml b/doc/intro.sgml
index ceef1f03ecf23999ff71ff4b693431a19d7913e7..25c672ea4429c990335d493de3aecac286b5b58e 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/intro.sgml
+++ b/doc/intro.sgml
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ are:
 <para>compatibility layer for &cmucl; specific code.</para>
 </listitem>
 <listitem>
-<para>improved robustness of the &mysql; back-end.</para>
+<para>much improved robustness for the &mysql; back-end.</para>
 </listitem>
 <listitem>
 <para>improved system loading.</para>
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ are:
       <para> &clsql; uses &defsystem to compile and load its
 components.  &defsystem; is included in the <ulink
 url="http://clocc.sourceforge.net"><citetitle>&clocc;</citetitle></ulink> collection. The
-defsystem version in the pre-packaged distribution is rather old and
+version in the pre-packaged distribution is rather old and
 may not function well. The version in CVS tree tree works quite
-well. For convenience, a copy of the latest defsystem at the FTP
+well. For convenience, a copy of the latest &defsystem; at the FTP
 <ulink
 url="ftp://ftp.med-info.com/pub/defsystem/"><citetitle>site</citetitle></ulink>
 of &clsql;.