r8211: documentation improvements, fix typo in error string

[clsql.git] / doc / preface.xml

diff --git a/doc/preface.xml b/doc/preface.xml
index 774ddb2e5456efc25ba3f9b3766c4d6e6da0c97d..f8a2c614935c8eb72b89dc4b23a838cfde390661 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/preface.xml
+++ b/doc/preface.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' ?>   <!-- -*- DocBook -*- -->
+<?xml version='1.0' ?>
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN"
                "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd" [
 <!ENTITY % myents SYSTEM "entities.xml">
@@ -7,15 +7,11 @@
 
 <preface id="preface">
   <title>Preface</title>
-  <para>This guide provides reference
-    to the features of &clsql;.  The first 
-    chapter provides an introduction to &clsql; and installation
-    instructions.
-    Following that chapter is the reference section for all user
-    accessible symbols of &clsql; with examples of usage,
-    followed by the reference section for all accessible symbols of
-    the database back-end interface.  At the end there you will find
-    a glossary of commonly used terms with their
-    definitions.
+  <para>
+    This guide provides reference to the features of &clsql;.  The
+    first chapter provides an introduction to &clsql; and installation
+    instructions.  The reference sections document all user accessible
+    symbols with examples of usage.  There is a glossary of commonly
+    used terms with their definitions.
   </para>
 </preface>